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First Draft in 30 Days: A Novel Writer's System for Building A Complete
and Cohesive Manuscript
by Karen Wiesner
Writer's Digest Books
216 Pages
Reviewed by Beth Morrow
Copyright 2006 - All
Rights Reserved
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As a perpetual dieter and unorganized fiction writer,
there are two things of which I am most skeptical: quick weight-loss
schemes and programs that claim to help scattered writing souls like
myself compose fiction from an outline. While I still haven't found
anything to help my waistline more than following the good,
old-fashioned adage of eat-less-exercise-more, I dare say Karen
Wiesner's First Draft in 30 Days has me reconsidering--and almost
excited about--the value of outlining prior to writing.
Like diet programs, I've tried every
plotting/structure/organizing plan for writers known to mankind. From
books to index cards to computer programs and everything in between, I
accepted long ago that I'm a pantser (as opposed to the neat and orderly
plotter) and that to try and organize my fiction writing process was an
exercise in futility. While I write from outline in my nonfiction
pieces, the impulsive, dynamic nature of fiction made me believe it
almost impossible to reign in on the direction of my stories in advance.
Until Wiesner's book. Though I read with an open
mind, the skeptic in the back of my mind continued reminding me of the
similarities between the first few worksheets in the book and other
methods that haven't worked for me. I've done the character, setting and
plot sketches before only to leave them behind (Days 1-6). I've composed
lengthy lists of information I need to research for inclusion in my
second drafts (Days 7-13). I've even tried writing fiction from an
elaborately created outline nearly half the length of the final book
(Days 16-30). What I hadn't done is consider my story sections
(beginning, middle and end) with the 30 Days' Story Evolution Worksheet
and information (Days 14-15).
Part Christopher Vogler's The Writer's Journey,
part your own application, the Story Evolution information was just what
my non-structured brain needed to take those necessary baby steps to get
me from the point of idea/concept/writing to a solid, workable, sensible
outline I could use to get me to my final draft. In fact, after reading
the story evolution chapters, I proceeded to head to bed after a long
day of teaching, but the impact of those chapters, the possibilities of
their being able to truly change the way I approached my writing excited
me so much I had to get up and try for myself. In a matter of minutes, I
recreated the worksheets on my laptop, printed them off and in an hour
had the entire first third of my story outlined. I don't recall being so
excited by brainstorming and outlining in a long time. Ok, quite
possibly never--which illustrates my point.
In addition to the schedules, worksheets and goal
sheets in the book, there are also sections on how to use the 30 Day
Method if you have a work in progress, how to keep track of romance,
mystery and suspense/thriller plotlines if that's your genre and even
suggestions and plans on how to outline your career path as a writer.
While it's true each writer approaches their craft in
a unique way, there is a great deal of information to be learned from
Karen Wiesner's First Draft in 30 Days. Even if you don't use her
structure, thinking of the elements of story before you're knee-deep in
plot, scene and structure couldn't hurt. Then again, neither would an
extra jog on the treadmill….
About the
author: Beth Morrow is a nationally published
freelance writer who wishes chocolate were considered part of the
vegetable food group. At the moment, she's researching male and female
speech patterns for an article coming this fall to a writer's magazine
near you and can't wait to get back to her outlining her current
work-in-progress. |